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OK, maybe not immortality; but, we could definately use another reality check. We compiled the suggestions after our first attempt and did all we could to improve up and to this point. Now we are craving more feedback.

For those of you running older programs, as I do on my other computer, objects may seem larger than they appear.

If you are even mildly offended by scantily dressed homosapiens, please just wish us well and do not visit. Our catalog contains pictures of people dressed in see through clothing. This is a clothing site, not a porn site.

www.edgeways.biz

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Ok here goes time for hommie to offer his advice.

the store is well alot better just a tad to wide but not noticable i didnt need to scroll right to c the extra 5 pixels or so that was off the edge of screen. Colours,setup and images are spot on.

The logo seems a bit out of place on the store maybe it should be on a white background instead of black.

good work on the store.

notice i keep saying store?

first 2 pages of website i dont like 2 big 2 dark look like a porn site i was waiting for 20 pop ups to start off and take over my internet :)

i would either have a store as main site or do some serious work on your welcome page as there is no point having a nice store if people are clicking off teh first page and dont know u have a shop.

my 2 cents - sorry but really nice shop

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Where's the store?

I see a really big (too big) front page, but no link to the store.

I notice you don't actually have the background set as blank, only a table. So the white border is a little naff to coin a phrase.

I'm sure you can find a better free HTML generator than Excel. :sleep:

Still not found the store though. :wacko:

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I cant even find the ENTER to the site LOL :D

I am using 1024x768 and the first photo page or whatever it is, is huge :D

Remove it or if YOU like it so much, make it smaller starting from 800x600 :wacko:

No offence but is it a porn site? I couldnt manage to enter and see :sleep:

Lovely women i must say :)

PS: after a while the ENTER did work but wasnt active for some time :(

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Guest edgeways

I think we got it figured out. Please have another look and let us know what you think.

This is an adult clothing catalog site, so please just wish us well and don't visit if you are even mildly offended by slight nudity.

Thanks to all.

www.edgeways.biz

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Guest Daniell

Check your payment method Page. Font could maybe, need taking down a point or two. You have also have repeated the statement below twice on the same page.

"If you have any questions or concerns, please contact us via e-mail. [email protected]"

I noticed, there is no 'page limit' in each category. Its not too bad at the moment. But, if you add further lines to your stock, each page is going to go on and on, and the pages will take longer to load.

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Guest woodbtreasures

If I may suggest, I think that you should go with a black body background and then do new butons up in a bright or dark red color.

Font color of white or something easily readable against the dark background.

IMHO would look killer and very dramatic plus fit the style of your site ;)

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I agree, lose the intro page. It's just a waste of everybody's time.

The "logo" graphic at the top of store is horrible. No offense intended, but it screams "amateur".

Also, lose the "Sexy" in the category titles. It is a bit redundant and potentially ambiguous. Let your buyers decide what's sexy. After all, the tastes of those purchasing your wares are most likely a bit skewed from the norm anyway.

:w00t:

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